Snakewoman of Little Egypt by Robert Hellenga, narrated by Coleen Marlo
Published in audio by Tantor Audio, published in print by Bloomsbury USA
Synopsis:
Newly released from prison after being incarcerated for six years for shooting her husband, Sunny just wants to move on with her life, starting by getting a college degree. She has requested that the prison not notify her abusive, snake-handling husband of her release, and headed to the college where her dead uncle once worked as a janitor. He rather conveniently left her $80,000 and apparently nobody at the university has a problem admitting a felon who didn’t complete high school, so she is set to study French and biology. Before long, Sunny finds herself involved with Jackson, her uncle’s friend, and finds Jackson becoming increasingly intrigued by her ex-husband’s church or snake-handlers. Nothing good can come of Sunny’s old and new worlds colliding.
Thoughts on the story:
Where oh where to begin? There are so many serious issues with this story that I’m sure I will not manage to list all of them, so let me start by saying I wonder just exactly how it made it past an editor. I can see how it might have been picked up initially, because the idea of the plot is strong, but there are so many serious errors in execution -especially in the second half – that I’m surprised it is at large in the marketplace.
To begin: the info dumps. It is quite obvious that Hellenga did extensive research for Snakewoman of Little Egypt, but he has the worst case of ‘let me show you what I know’ of any novelist I have ever read. Everything from kettle drums (which are not really drums, you know) to the interaction between squirrels and snakes. If Hellenga looked it up, he was damn well going to let you know about it. 98% of it was completely superfluous and distracted from the limited emotional life of the characters (more on that in a minute). Simply cutting all of these extra digressions, none of which particularly added anything, would have made Snakewoman of Little Egypt 100% better, although perhaps still not good.
Perhaps most importantly, there was no real character development. Nobody grew, nobody changed, and the reader was never given any indication of anyone’s real internal life. What happened between Sunny and Jackson having sex and them becoming a couple? How did Claire feel when she found out that her affair with Jackson was being ended because of his new relationship with Sunny? Instead of treating us to any of these insights, Hellenga spends his time in Sunny’s head as she wonders what sex was like between Jackson and his pygmy girlfriend.
In addition to these issues there were phrases repeated ad nauseum – including, among other things, the phrase “superhuman erection” to describe the feeling of holding a snake – and bulky, unrealistic dialogue added for exposition and the furtherance of plot at the expense of internally consistent story. OH, and the fact that every damn thing comes back to sex for Sunny and, to a lesser extent, the entire cast of characters.
The worst part is that the first half of the book actually showed a fair amount of promise, but everything went downhill after Jackson uttered the phrase “superhuman erection” for the second time about halfway through the book.
Thoughts on the audio production:
This is the part that makes me sad, because Marlo’s narration really is quite good. I wasn’t crazy about the voice she gave to one of the minor characters, but she was excellent at distinguishing between characters and switching between accents. Even her skilled narration, though, can’t save this trainwreck of a book.
Overall:
Marlo’s narration does give the book some grace, but the audio format also accentuates the repeated phrases and inhibits skimming over info dumps, so I would advise just staying away from this book in general.
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I loved your term “info dumps.” Nothing could be more true. May we never hear the term “superhuman erection” ever again!
From your lips to God’s ears.
(Wait, when did I turn 80 and start using that phrase?)
Holy crap. Well I’m sure appreciative that you suffered through this and gave us all fair warning.
I have to say, I’m a *little* mad at Jennifer (but not actually) because she listened to this just before me and didn’t shout the ridiculousness from the rooftops.
Well, I think this is a pass! Entertaining review, though!
Ug, thanks for taking the bullet and reading this book so the rest of us can avoid it like the plague. I’m always shocked when crappy books get published when I know there are remarkable books out there that don’t.
Interesting review. I like that you separated out the narrator review from the book review. Some people wouldn’t think to do that.
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Oh yes, I think that’s a very important distinction.
Eek, I don’t think I could have gotten through this one. I’ve been known to listen to a so-so book with an excellent narrator (though rarely the other way around), but I doubt this one would make it onto the list. Thanks for the warning…I’ll steer clear!
The hard part was the first half really wasn’t bad. I wasn’t loving it, but mostly I was enjoying it, then the whole thing just went to crazytown.
You and Jennifer have convinced me that this isn’t for me.
Oh dear, the title is catchy, the cover is catchy but I don’t even want to know what is the context for superhuman erection LOL
The context is not as bad as you are expecting, I promise. That is how one of the (male) characters describes the feeling of holding a large, powerful snake (not an euphemism) for the first time. If he hadn’t REPEATED it later, it wouldn’t have been so bad, but…
superhuman erection? oh heavens…
“so let me start by saying I wonder just exactly how it made it past an editor”…sadly I have read books that make me ask that too.
Ugh, I hadn’t heard of SNAKEWOMAN OF LITTLE EGYPT, and I’ll plan to stay away from “this trainwreck of a book.”
Thanks for the warning flares on the tracks!!
I’ve read a couple of Hellenga’s previous novels, and that was enough to let me know he’s not an author I plan to seek out again. Your and Jennifer’s reviews of this one have reinforced that decision, so thanks for that :-)!
I didn’t think the audiobook was all that bad. I actually got more interested in the story, particularly when Jackson didn’t go to France. I think Marlo’s excellent narration sustained my interest. Perhaps that’s why this won the Audie.
I agree that Marlo was fantastic. Unfortunately even the best narration couldn’t save that story for me.